Upon Your Honor by Marie Lavender

A tale of romance on the high seas. When Chloe stows away on a ship in order to escape a foreboding fiancé, the last thing she expects is to find safety in the arms of a dashing sailor. When her fiancé refuses to give up in getting her back, Chloe questions if her sailor will succeed in keeping her safe forever.

What’s it About?

New York City, August, 1891 – Orphaned after the death of her father, Chloe Waverly stows away on La Voyageur to escape the clutches of her cruel fiancé, Lamonte Beckett. Gabriel Hill, a strange and compelling gentleman, comes upon Chloe and promises to protect her without knowing the true circumstances of why she is running away. During their journey, Gabriel doesn’t bargain on being distracted by her fair beauty or succumbing to her many charms. As their attraction to each other grows, so does the danger and Gabriel suspects things are not as they should be. Both are determined to get to New Orleans, where she can start a new life. But, once they reach their destination, events spin out of their control and Chloe is captured by the fiancé she escaped. Gabriel is left wondering if he can overlook her betrayal. Soon he finds himself in a race against time, to reach her before Beckett can exact revenge.

First Impressions

Well, I must say I found this second installment in the Heiress in Love trilogy, and the lead couple presented, to be a vast improvement from book one! The primary contributing factor to this success was that where we saw our book one couple separated by the vast ocean for years at a time, Chloe and Gabriel spend most of this sequel traveling together on the same boat. While there may be several scenes which see them separated by Gabriel’s workings either above or below deck, they can’t help but be thrown together amidst a tumultuous storm, during a walk on deck beneath the night sky, or even during an attempted mutiny by hired assassins. Gabriel serves as the protector on whom Chloe desperately depends, and she evokes a feeling of “home” that Gabriel didn’t realize he needed so badly.

Hiding the Truth

Overall this second novel presented us with likable characters that we hoped would find a happily ever after together, but we do also see some themes carry over from book one which were less than stellar. Most discerningly was the fact that while Chloe and Gabe are clearly smitten with each other and on the verge of falling head over heels in love, neither believes the other could feel anything momentous towards them, and neither is willing to admit how much they truly care. It was a markedly frustrating aspect of the read which lent itself to some rather unnecessary drama. For Gabe, he believes Chloe deserves someone better than a sailor who spends lengthy amounts of time at sea. When he finally realizes how much he loves Chloe, and that he’d love nothing more than to spend the rest of his life with her, he still chooses to remain close-lipped about it for a long time. If the romance of his parents (who were the focus of book one and whose love story he summarizes to Chloe) taught us anything, it’s that keeping that kind of admission to yourself can only lead to misunderstanding and heartache.

As for Chloe, the silence about her true feelings and the details of her past was a bit more confusing. Chloe is on the run from a seemingly diabolical fiancé her father promised her to on his deathbed. This fiancé refuses to allow Chloe to say no to his proposal, and when she runs away he hires a group of ruthless men to get her back. The scenes involving Chloe being set upon, kidnapped, tied up and almost violated are too numerous to count, yet she refuses to reveal to Gabe that all of these incidents are at the hands of her maniacal fiancé. She believes telling him would only put Gabe in more danger, and he might even feel required to send her back to this crazy man. Darling, the man has been in countless sword fights since you came along because of confrontations with the men trying to retrieve you, I think telling him the truth behind their determination could only help matters!

*A copy of this book was provided for an honest review*

Series: Heiresses in Love, book 2.

Final Impressions: This was definitely an improvement upon the romance related in book one. However, I do wish this second book had opened with at least one scene involving Chloe and her supposedly unbearable fiancé. He is absent for so much of the read, and we primarily deal with his henchmen throughout the book, so I would have appreciated an initial glimpse into our overarching villain before diving right into the story. It was also somewhat unbelievable that Gabe wouldn’t have demanded an explanation from Chloe about the danger seemingly following her everywhere since she came onto his father’s ship. However, you can’t help but appreciate the progression of watching Chloe see Gabe as her foe, to protector, to the love of her life.

Smut Level: There’s a few moments of passionate kissing which eventually build up to some beautifully tender lovemaking.

View it on Amazon: Click Here. Summer Solstice Publishing. 361 Pages.